Romantic Rain (Narrative text, Revision Sweet Spy)

Romantic Rain

Alice was a girl who studied in the Monash University. She came from Indonesia. She studied English there, and she lived with her aunt.

One day, she went to campus, in the street while walking, and it was a rainy day, suddenly  a guy joined in her umbrella and hugged her shoulders. Certainly, she shocked because she actually didn’t know who is that guy, but she just in silent and across the street then that guy went away after say, “thank you.” Alice still shocked, but she didn’t have any time because she has a class. She learned about music, and her lecture asked them to interview a musician or person who could play and understand about music.

On the Sunday, she went to park, but she stopped in front of the café shop, because she saw the guy that she met yesterday. He was playing guitar and Alice remembered about her task, so she wanted to ask him to teach her, but she was afraid to get closer with him. About ten minutes, she sat in front of the café. Suddenly, that guy came to her table and sat in front of her and said,” are you waiting for me?”  what?  I ......just passed here so I ...”. “ oh I got it, sorry about yesterday I was in hurry. Well, I’m Ian. You? “I’m Alice.”

Then they were talked a lot, and Alice asked him to teach her playing music and Ian accepted. Every-day Alice always played with Ian, but one day while they were practicing there were two men who always followed them, and it made Ian upset because he knew that man, and he accompanied Alice was walking toward her house because he wanted to know that Alice's safe, but he didn’t tell  Alice what was going on.

On the Christmas day, Ian asked Alice to date with him and Alice accepted his invitation and that night Ian told everything about himself to Alice that he was a son of very dangerous spy in the world. That organization had a plan to attack the President after Christmas, and it made Alice shocked because she never thought that Ian was a spy. Ian told  it was his mistakes and made Alice fell in love with him because his father was warned him that he wouldn’t play and had  friends.

After heard it from Ian, she got upset and furious and Ian said, “I’m so sorry Alice, you know I love you, but I can’t stand by your side when you need me, would you be gonna ok without me ?. ”Alice just kept silent. She wanted cry, but she was too shy, then she said, “I will always be waiting for you Ian. I don’t care about your job, and we will be  met again right ?. “I hope so ” he replied. He hugged Alice for a moment then he ran away to the boat. Alice was crying.

After Ian leaved, Alice always listened to the music that they were usually played together.  She graduated from college, and she  waited for Ian for three years. However, Ian never came again, and she married with his friend Rio, suddenly, on  her married party. Ian came up and gave flower and said congratulation to Alice and Rio. Alice was crying, but Ian said he was happy shared his time with Alice.

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